Molded to the curve of the pillar she waited for the vicar on this treacherous night, the tenebrious seducer of the consecrated, damning their souls before draining them of life. Exquisite; I had chosen well, and the dark gift accentuated the seductive features of her once-mortal skin. Her stockings and unfathomable bodice made her irresistible. She did this for me as much as she did it for herself. She enthralled me nightly. It wasn't the hunt that compelled me, no. After her slow and delicate piercing of their willing vein, after the movement of her throat with each savoured swallow, lost in the ecstasy, she flashed open those shaded lids to pierce me with her predatory gaze.
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Challenge was to write a flash fiction of 80-120 words
and include the H.P.Lovecraft word "tenebrous" in the piece
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10 comments:
Excellent. Perfect dark tone to match the pic.
Happy FFF!
I love how you have developed the darkness of this picture.
Happy FFF x
I like the use of the word vicar. I like the image of drawing in the pious into a web. Someone like those movies where the devil is in the form of a preacher.
I really like this. The way the darkness is built up to the end.
Ooh, I liked this one a lot. You managed to be both descriptive and expository in such a short space.
Mmm! I enjoyed this very much!
"...the tenebrious seducer of the consecrated..." Love it!
Wonderful story, dark tone all the way up to the sexy bite...
I love the way she targets him at the end... ingenious. begs the question to be asked - does she or doesn't she?
Thanks everyone - I've been reading the last of the Vampire Chronicles so Anne Rice really influenced this piece for me. I really played up the relationship between the maker and the child here.
Ryan:
I spent a while debating whether or not to use 'vicar' - thanks for confirming that I made the right choice ;-)
Oh my. Sex, vampires and voyeurism! I think this one is my favorite this week. Well done!
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